All Comments on 'The Last Night of the Fair'

Hot story. To bad it's a promise that likely won't be kept. I would enjoy more.

Fantastic! THIS is the kind of story I search for, often in vain: how two like-minded guys find each other and finally cross the line. Beautiful!

Yeah, a promise that won't be kept, but a sweet memory that you'll never forget. Beautifully done!

Well written

Lovely story of lust, longing. sex & goodbye. :)

Great story. Was it set somewhere along the south coast of England? Because, having just seen the Exeter Chiefs playing rugby from the sidelines, my imagination immediately went to 2 Chiefs rugby players who would be my go to image of Dan. Tall, broad shouldered but small waisted, with real thick muscly thighs, great arses and heavily pouched in the crotch area. It was a struggle to stop myself from streaking onto the pitch and laying down legs apart in front of them!

Lovely story and I think my heart broke a little at the end.