by telanna
He is very volatile. I know he's anxious to find his mate, but if he keeps this up she won't want anything to do with him.
no i think he acts in such a way because he thinks dante hurt his mate
Excellent story. You do need to be more aware of your spelling and grammar, as these errors detract from the story; having said that, I am looking forward to the next chapter...
Nice continuation I like how you covered Donavon's events too bad the chapter ended so soon. Can't wait to read Chapter 6
Oh come on! It starts to get good and then you end it and leave us wanting more. more please.
I am upset with you. i have been sittting on pins and needless waiting for this chapter........i love this story but the waiting sucks!!!!!
People stop being so freaking critical of the spelling you liked the story didn't you?! Get over it geez
I loved it telanna keep writing please
I hope that you will be sending another chapter soon. The wait is killing me...LOL
Glad I found this as it has been a very good story. I am putting it on my favs list so I can keep an eye out for updates. Please maam, may we have another? : )
Great story. I am anxiously waiting the next chapter. Please keep it coming.
The wait is killing me when are we going to get to read the next chapter?
The chapters are getting so much better and longer,,,good work,,,thank you..