All Comments on 'The Last Person I Expected to See'

by Kingnumero

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Blessthefall96Blessthefall96over 4 years ago
Good but Short

I like the concept, the situation, but I'm one for a little more detail. I understand they were in a public place so the sex had to be quick but even a hint at why they got divorced would have been sufficient because they obviously had good chemistry. But overall a good start to a series!

BruneauBruneauover 4 years ago
Sexy and fun,

I enjoyed this story. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I just laugh and shake my head as we load go in my car.

Huh??

KingnumeroKingnumeroover 4 years agoAuthor
Typo

"I just laugh and shake my head as we load go in my car."

Meant to read as follows:

I just laugh and shake my head as we load ourselves into my car.

Hope that clears that up. 😋

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