All Comments on 'The Last Verse'

Reads well but too much backstory. Tighten it up, give your readers some credit to figure some things out. Not the normal premise which is a plus but it didn't hold up for me. Would a wife have done that after a single remark made by her husband while drinking? His credulity would have been stretched too thin. A four.

Thanks for sharing.

Fuck cucks!

Hopefully next time will be the real thing. Thanks for the story.

If he believes her that nothing happened, I have a bridge in Brooklyn to sell him. What a dumb fool, he has been cuckolded. She cheated on his ass. Well, he did say that he wanted to be cuckolded, he got his wish and I hope he lives to regret it. This is a lame attempt of a cheating story. Just 2 stars and 2 thumbs down.

It can be incredible exploring each other’s sexuality and being adventurous, just as it should be. That said not everyone can cope with it, some people get horribly jealous. I’m glad my husband and I fall into the first category.

Thanks for sharing. Tess (UK)

So, will the subpoena from my lawyer feel real? You'll find out after noon tomorrow. I'm sleeping in the other bedroom now.

She was good but he is pathetic.

It was sexy and hot. Great fantasy.

Liked the build up and the question at the end.

Isn't this slut wife forgetting the most important thing mentioned at the very beginning of this story... hubby said he'd like to WATCH her with another guy.. NEVER ever did he say anything about an open pass to fuck someone then come home..this lady needs a talking to with some rules to follow

to: "Must not be a church choir!"

You don't think church choir members can't be adulterous and manipulative ?

Surely this dude ain’t that dumb. Cum textured lube? Come on , man!

This is a good story. It's arousing, exciting and fun to read and you did it all in a few words. It's easy to rate this five stars.

Cuck shit, no thanks

It exists! Google it!

Happy reading.

Well done, 5 stars

Well written, and possibly a lead up to the real thing.

Leave it there or move it to fetish if she does....scored it as fantasy

JJ

What I wish I could have written like back in the days when I wrote LW stories. dialogue driven, detailed, all the good stuff. Not the ending I had hoped for, but okay...

I hope that you continue, and add a chapter featuring Erica and Adriana (otherwise why mention them here?).

Is so much better than just knowing. I sit in my chair at the foot of our bed, my wife gets on top and opens wide, dropping down on her latest guy. I get to watch it go in, fascinating.

My husband hinted for years that he wanted to watch me get fucked. It finally happened while we were on vacation and had been drinking. That was 11 years and many strange cocks ago. My cravings and his voyeurism are well satisfied. Good writing!

"Reality had shifted back into place, somehow. I had my wife back, somehow."

Yes, the sex was hot. But it was still a man that thought he was loosing his wife.

Nothing sexy about that.

PFH. Pretty Fuckin Hawt

Well done. You drew us in and we were fooled just like hubby!

And so the two of them move on from there?