All Comments on 'The Laundry Room Pt. 03'

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whacky76whacky76over 2 years ago

Weird story, never any explanation about Jonathan crying and why he had to fuck laundry room girl. You need some background on your characters before the sex. I can't rate this story because it doesn't have a true beginning or continuity.

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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