All Comments on 'The Lauranna Vignettes Pt. 01'

...and a dream or not? at first i was doubtful about the use of lower-case but i grew used to it and it worked. so i'm doing the same here in acknowledgement. this is an interesting little interlude, anna, and your writing now is going from strength to strength. it's always good to see your name on the listings.

One of my favourite words... sloshing... delighted to see its use. Short sweet and to the point, as always wonderfully eloquent in your use of language. I look forward to further short stories

Yes, it worked. Nice. Stylish. Presumably not knowing the conventional details (characters, back story etc.) is part of the concept, so let's not complain about the lack of them.

I love your stories, I'm a fan, but the absence of capitals made it hard to read and I gave up before the end. Sorry.

MMm, yummy, loved it - the whole style thing worked well and gave it a dream-like quality. More please!

Hi Anna

I too am a fan of e e cummings, and the style worked for me perfectly, adding vividness and a feeling of urgency and of a surging rush of accumulating emotions and sensatons. Absolutely LOVED IT.

Marixxxxx

Loving it so far

Great start to a wonderful story-telling series. The description of the love making between lira and Anna was amazing and made it so so real