by carvohi
okay I love this update, all the things missing in the other chapters are here now. i love the emotions that are playing out between them, Shawn is a sick f*ck but i like him.
She pines for this cat and then abandons it....TWICE. Even when she returns she still does not ask where it is, STRANGE. Other than that I'm enjoying this, keep it up.
Good job,keep working.maybe i must take the cat,must i??? :))
I'm along for the ride where ever the story goes. Good writing and editing makes it a pleasure to read.
Now that I'm interested as to what is going to happen to the mysterious man who kidnapped her, causes me to keep reading.
Thanks for the good chapter.
Nice plotting! Like another comment I just read ... I'm along for the ride!
[Gualterio]
Glossing over the rape?
Fuck you!
I have known way too many rape victims and I am a CSA survivor.
Fuck you!
Just my opinion @silent sound; isn't a story about a killer and lawyer on erotic sight contradictory with CSA. I mean that is a horrible thing to happen to any human being; worse for children. So my question is why would you be on a site that contains: violence, human degradation, incest with "children" involved. As well as, BDSM, rape, and the list goes on. It seems to me that would be counterproductive to the continuation of the healing process. There are many novels and or stories that don't have this type of content on other sites. For the benefit of your health please seek out something else to read. Also, I feel for you, but you are a survivor. So get off of this site and find one that brings you peace and joy. Good luck! 🙂