All Comments on 'The Layover'

This got me off so well... such amazing writing THANK YOU!

Fanfuckingtastic! I came so fucking hard reading this. More! I need more!

Thank you so much for this. No story has ever got me so wet. I need more

If the first 3 comments are any indication, I’m pleased to know that I got some of you off. That was indeed the intent! I came quite a few times writing it ;)

Got me nice and excited under my desk at work!

Nice. I guess that proves this story IS Safe For Work!

Very very hot...loved it.

Five and fave.

Thanks a bunch!

Loved the story! I would love to see a follow up to this or even a deeper pre-story of their Katie and Jessica's first encounter or their wild sex weekend you eluded to. Also, more details on if they are bald/trimmed would make it hot :)

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. I like imagining the "wild weekend" as well. My intention was to drop you into this limited scope scene and just have the wild weekend as context to the tension. It hadn't occurred to me to flesh out a pre-story... that's a good idea! Would be better than a sequel, I think. And yes, good tip about what their pussies look like, since I get so much into how they taste and feel. Let's say, Katie's bare and Jess has a thin little landing strip above a clean shaven snatch... You must be a man, who I am told are very visually oriented in their porn / sexual imagination.

HOT story!! Anymore rendezvous' between them? I hope so

well done! loved it!

Thanks for the comments! As for another rendezvous, you never know. I haven't got one started yet, but there are a few tangents I could tease out...