All Comments on 'The Lecture Ch. 01'

Hopefully, you'll improve your writing skills!

story by Silky. Funny, sexy, fresh, original, even informative. A must read!!!!!!!!!

I'll take that job.

That's absolutely unreadable to the extent where it just annoyed me. not only had you thesaurus'd every fifth word, but some of them were just wrong! Sort it out, or get a decent editor. Please, do something. You almost had a somewhat good story there.

I prefer to not do this in public, but I don't like to delete the comments of someone just because they don't like what I wrote. This comment led me to re-read the entire story; I'm sorry, I didn't have any words that were inncorrect. Others might choose less sesquipedalian language, true, but I enjoy writing that way, otherwise it becomes pornography rather than erotica, in my mind. If you want to argue, please feel free to email me and tell me exactly what you didn't understand and I will explain it to you.

Silky

Give the thesaurus a rest.