All Comments on 'The Legend'

Great job! I really enjoyed this, Fun story and er- 'up-lifting'

Great job!

this may be by far the worse LIT story I've ever read. White dog? gray wolf? Geez, couldn't you at least make the names interesting?

It was a good story, I always enjoyed old legend and I am very certain that they were not the only brother sister mates back then.

It's good to hear the old stories. I have heard many Native American tales. My father was a wonderful story teller.

You did a good job. You wrote so it sounded as one of the elders was telling his story to the younger generation for them to learn.