All Comments on 'The Discipline of Art Ch. 02'

Please right another sequel

...DO NOT give different titles with "parenthesis-'chapter'-number-parenthesis".

It's lame, and unworkable.

It might work for this series; but what if you start a different series? You're good enough to have more than one series of stories. Unless you're declaring yourself as a "one trick pony".

thanks for the comments - first time submissions so still learning how to do this - following your suggestions the title should be changing soon to fall in line with the original story title. Hope this helps!

The changing POV weakens the narrative. Chapter one was all from Ellie's POV, and now we are inside Rob and Sam's head as well. The story would be better served to remain from her perspective. Otherwise a good story from a new writer. Thanks for posting.