by Pathekos
It has to have a lot more than this for me to rate it. Maybe after the next chapter
I love the intro. I think you're onto a great idea. My only complaint would be it's too short, though there are some that like them short.
I'm hoping they all accomplish what they set out to do, and maybe even be double teamed or triple teamed. Here's a suggestion, and it's just a suggestion. It's your tale, so do with it what you wish. But when they accomplish their goals, they need another adventure. Since they've already shown an inclination to lesbianism, and they're on their way to incest, have them seduce their own mums next. Being the horny little seductress, (seductrex, seductrice?), have them turn their formerly completely straight mums into avid snatch lickers. Just a thought.
Anyway, five stars and look forward to more.
Dewey Cheatham
G'day, Darius.
I didn't find chapters 3 and 4. Will you post them soon or are they on another site? This is quite the fantasy.