All Comments on 'The Librarian'

Not bad for an initial effort. Two pieces of advice. Slow down. You gave away the candy store in the first hundred words. Tease us, I promise we don’t mind. Second, describe your characters. All we know about Lisa or Judy is that Lisa is stacked. How can we fantasize if we are provided ammunition? You can’t expect us to do all the work 😜.

story overall was pretty good, for me I never liked the phrase "Bimbo" but some stories need to make a point by using it. I think it was need here once maybe twice, but instead it was overused. with that being said I would come back for another chapter to see what all Judy has instore for new slave.

I agree that this story has great potential to be an epic series. I would love to learn how The Librarian discovered/developed the letters. I would love to read about her expanding her lesbian harem.

I liked the premise of the story and the brevity. I gave it 5 stars. 3.4k words would be about 7 pages in a book. That's a good short chapter or a very short story. I'd like to know more about author ValorieGallows. I don't need detailed descriptions of characters and often find them off putting. I give up on a story when I get to "36DD" and/or "10 inch cock" because they seem so sophomoric. I tripped a little over "bimbo", but Lisa was enjoying submitting, so I went with it. I hope Judy takes good care of Lisa. Please give us more.

So hot. Great story! Thanks for sharing it with us!!! 😊

I like this Story much, i could feel the urge of Lisa, the curiousity in her mind, the weird Situation and somehow the relief for her becoming Judies slave.

I hope there will be at least another chapter for us 😁

Well, we could use another chapter or two of how Lisa is modified into being a good girl and what Judy has in store for her. I would rather the author continues with using the "good girl" moniker instead of "bimbo". Stories that use the word "bimbo" just seem boring, as with someone with a "14" cock and 48FFF breast sizes.