All Comments on 'The Life of Sara Wincester Ch. 03'

This story gets better with every chapter. Such wonderful free use series.

This is a great free use series! I really enjoy the world building. If you're taking notes, I'd love to see a "taboo" relationship develop between Sara and Max. It's tough to bring that kinky sense of a forbidden pleasure in a free use story, but you've really set up a way for it to work there!

Love the series, could you add more anal por favor?

Eagerly waiting for the next part!! - N

"Morning mom!" Sara mumbled as she entered the kitchen.

Dude, you seriously need lessons. You don't use an exclamation point at the end of a sentence that someone mumbled. You use a period.

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It would have been nice to have Sara whisper words of endearment to Max at the end before falling asleep. 😴

So I gave you 3/5 for this one.

Wow! Just found this series and it's probably my new favorite Free Use story! I really hope you continue~

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