All Comments on 'The Lifeguard'

Well I've read thousands of stories on here and that would go close to the worst I have ever read. No depth, no writing skill, no build up and so unrealistic it should be taken down.

No shit

im sorry but you could have developed the story better love. You should really try to rewrite it and make a sex scene that is much more erotic

This story is dreadful and i urge you not to read it!