All Comments on 'The Lilac Society Ch. 03'

by subchristopher

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
really

that was really bad u have sick mind no one should ever be treated like that u need some help

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great

Great development. I really like where this is going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Hot

Total submission, I hope you keep going with the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
wow

cant wait to read more

subboyjdsubboyjdabout 4 years ago

While the punishment is a bit over the top the mental/emotional side is conveyed very well. I am anticipating what is to come and looking forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good

Good story, the first punishment is a bit much would like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This is all....

a bit silly , really .

EustaceEustaceover 3 years ago

Any chance of another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Would love to read more of Chris submission to Lauren

CosmiccowboyqCosmiccowboyqalmost 3 years ago

I think this story has great possibilities. I like Lauren's quiet, but strong, no BS attitude. Didn't expect the whipping in the barn, but it certainly established her utter domination of him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

i liked the first 2 chapters but this hardly seemed sane to me. Far too extreme. Sutures? Hanging in rafters fo a day? I'm outta here.

questionman99questionman99almost 2 years ago

This has been a great story with a lot of promise. I loved the whipping and the total dominance, but honestly all the blood and sutures were a bit over the top, I thought. Still looking forward to more, though. Thanks for posting these.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nothing but sadism and misandry.

Not erotic, not exciting, not pleasurable, not enjoyable, just sick, dangerous & disgusting.

Sane, safe and consensual ? No !

LeoLewinskyLeoLewinsky10 months ago

Ok, end of story for me. Laureen has not proof to be responsible enough to own a human being. She had no control over her strokes enough, so she seriously hurted him. Now she will use the chastityshit as she is not capable to guide him only by her will and character. From here what follows is not of the quality I expected to find after reding the fascinating first chapter. Sorry, but this didn't develop good enough.

RegretsRegrets9 months ago

Bang goes his education

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Appalling.

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