by subchristopher
that was really bad u have sick mind no one should ever be treated like that u need some help
While the punishment is a bit over the top the mental/emotional side is conveyed very well. I am anticipating what is to come and looking forward to it.
Good story, the first punishment is a bit much would like to read more
I think this story has great possibilities. I like Lauren's quiet, but strong, no BS attitude. Didn't expect the whipping in the barn, but it certainly established her utter domination of him.
i liked the first 2 chapters but this hardly seemed sane to me. Far too extreme. Sutures? Hanging in rafters fo a day? I'm outta here.
This has been a great story with a lot of promise. I loved the whipping and the total dominance, but honestly all the blood and sutures were a bit over the top, I thought. Still looking forward to more, though. Thanks for posting these.
Nothing but sadism and misandry.
Not erotic, not exciting, not pleasurable, not enjoyable, just sick, dangerous & disgusting.
Sane, safe and consensual ? No !
Ok, end of story for me. Laureen has not proof to be responsible enough to own a human being. She had no control over her strokes enough, so she seriously hurted him. Now she will use the chastityshit as she is not capable to guide him only by her will and character. From here what follows is not of the quality I expected to find after reding the fascinating first chapter. Sorry, but this didn't develop good enough.