All Comments on 'The Lineage Ch. 10'

Ah, and here I thought the ending would be her siring an entire generation of futas like herself. It seems her magic works differently. As far as feedback goes, I like to read smut where all parties are having a good time, so this one was a miss on that desire. But the emotional scenes of getting over the trauma were pretty well written. I think the low rating on this chapter is probably from lack of smut. I think most series like to go out with a bang. Three scenes from 10 chapters is probably a bit too low for a ratio in this site. It's a bit of a disappointing tease when you introduce slutty princess and don't capitalize on it I also thought it weird when the elf said "I can only hope to be as lucky to find such a spouse" to the king. I guess that implies she's not with the guard anymore? But the guard is there after time skip?

Responding to GlenOfGlass here, I can agree with this issue that this type of work, with chapters that have no smut being rated low because Literotica is, first and foremost, a website that caters to that demographic. Having only three smut scenes in a 10-chapter work is obviously going against that current, but regardless this is how my writing will likely go, with smut-free spans in between sex scenes. I also post my works to Archive Of Our Own and Scribble Hub, where such factors are more easily accepted. Also, people on both those sites have brought up the issue that the guardswoman is absent from this chapter, not even a mention. If you want, you can find my comments mainly on AO3 about why this is the case, but to set everyone on Literotica's mind at ease, the guard has not been abandonded and keeps very close connection to MC.

Twas a good story