All Comments on 'The Lingerie Clerk'

by phillyfilmore

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved that boutique!!!

I wish I knew where that boutique is, I'd be there a lot. Thanks for sharing, maybe we'll go back one day...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

That was a sexy story. I'd buy my wife more lingerie...with a sales assistant and that service like that!!!

julie_oregonjulie_oregonabout 8 years ago
Needs a sequel

This story is quite good as is. But it would be better to have the clerk give out her phone number and continue the adventure at her place or theirs…

phillyfilmorephillyfilmoreabout 8 years agoAuthor
Sequel thoughts

Thank you, julie_oregon - I will consider a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot

Extremely hot and well written. Thank you

TheIrishTuxTheIrishTuxabout 8 years ago
Excellent

A fantastic and erotica story. The present tense format threw me a little bit, but that's a minor, bitpicky, personal gripe. Great job!

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 7 years ago
Hot, Wet, Sultry, and Original

Really loved it. Narrative interesting - One of the few times use of the second-person has worked for me. HOT SEX. Made me very wet.

xoxo,

Di

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