by phillyfilmore
Really loved it. Narrative interesting - One of the few times use of the second-person has worked for me. HOT SEX. Made me very wet.
xoxo,
Di
A fantastic and erotica story. The present tense format threw me a little bit, but that's a minor, bitpicky, personal gripe. Great job!
Thank you, julie_oregon - I will consider a sequel!
This story is quite good as is. But it would be better to have the clerk give out her phone number and continue the adventure at her place or theirs…
That was a sexy story. I'd buy my wife more lingerie...with a sales assistant and that service like that!!!
I wish I knew where that boutique is, I'd be there a lot. Thanks for sharing, maybe we'll go back one day...