All Comments on 'The List Ch. 01'

Credible erotica,I must just be talking from experience,my sister and I ???????

The nightclub scene was very well done. The dialogue was realistic and flowed naturally. It will be interesting to see how well David does with the rest of his list.

Damn, that was a good one. This is the way a story should be written... something that's lacking by most entries here on the Lit.

Very well written, and a very enviable experience. I tip my hat to you, sir.

Lenslord

Loved the story. Reminded me of my sister!!

This was so good it deserves at least another chapter.