by nguyenvanphuoc
Very well written, and a very enviable experience. I tip my hat to you, sir.
Lenslord
Damn, that was a good one. This is the way a story should be written... something that's lacking by most entries here on the Lit.
The nightclub scene was very well done. The dialogue was realistic and flowed naturally. It will be interesting to see how well David does with the rest of his list.
Credible erotica,I must just be talking from experience,my sister and I ???????