All Comments on 'The Little Red Pill Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh boy...

Yeah, they aren't going to last the week before shit gets Really Crazy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I was super into it until other women got involved

I was really liking that they started this as a couple, and glad when a plot mechanism to prevent Julie from cheating showed up. Her talking dirty to him about the nurse while jerking him off for a medical sample was one thing, but seriously talks about bringing in her girlfriend to fuck and the opening of the next chapter makes me fear this is going to turn into a breeding harem fantasy and I'll honestly be a little disappointed if it does. =\

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 3 years ago
bummer

This was so danged hot!

and then you got greedy.

The neighbor girl, the nurse, the single friend... it'll be a harem of preggers women that nobody can support and nobody can explain... what a waste of a fun story.

Yeah, I know, it's fantasy, but the element of a couple that is insanely attracted to one another - and nobody else - would have been that much more impressive instead of yet another 'guy fucks everyone and wife cheers him on' fic, which are a dime a gross.

cindyp1976cindyp1976almost 3 years ago

I love it and I really want one of those pills to bad they aren't real. while I kind of agree with the other readers that it would have been great if it was just the two of them you know true love and all that with no other women the fact is if he is constantly horny and producing sperm in increasing amounts his wife is going to need help with taking care of him or she would be hurting a lot all the time. maybe he could get a job as a stud for women that want to get pregnant but would prefer the old fashioned way to invitro

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I have always enjoyed a particular type of erotica, the kind that focuses on our own base desires overcoming our sense of reason or decorum. Through fantasy or far flung science, my characters explore their sexuality's limits, often with transformative results. For everyth...

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