All Comments on 'The Local Girl Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ahhhh, so good. Keep them coming please

moni23moni23over 1 year ago

love the dynamics between them

dogged1dogged111 months ago

The plot and the sex ramped up so quickly in this installment, it left me breathless, but not as affected as Amber. On that note, Amber has sunk so rapidly into her own morass of primal need. there is little chance of her formulating a thought beyond her next orgasm. I revel at her self-imposed degradation and wantonness.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

we are missing the next chapter, i loved it, hope to read next part soon, and to see Pamsy more degraded, and dependant, also she could just sing over her things to Amy, but we'll see

Arszlan69Arszlan693 months ago

It's just that it would be really nice if you continued, because the story is very good, I couldn't stop reading until the so-called end, and it would have a rather stupid ending!

MiloXartsMiloXarts3 months agoAuthor

The fifth part is already in review and should be published within a few days.

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