All Comments on 'The Lockdown Ch. 02'

Hey, Bridget, nice story, i like it, but i need you to get to the most important part of their relationship, love, they know that they are so much falling in love with each other and need to show and act on it, they need to make love to each other day and night, Nathan will pump his loving seed in moms needy pussy to impregnate her, thet are made for each other.

This mad world needs to have even a little bit of true love..., keep writing!

Bridget, your writing is next level. It is beyond physical as this relationship has immense emotional appeal. Spectacular indeed.

All I can say is WOW!

I'm loving this.

And you're capturing what I think a fellow might think and feel in a situation like this.

Please keep up your excellent work.

Very good, I hope there is more to come.

Like it! Would like more description of their appearance.

Great, keep it coming

Loved it hope you continue to the next level

Hot damn, this is one of the sexiest stories I've read on this site, but you're also capturing the love and the emotion perfectly between mother and son. Waiting with bated breath for the next installment!

Very hot and well wt

Part 3?

Now for the conclusion hope its as good as the 1st and 2 part .

Loved when she went down on him and he was on the phone ... bravo

Something hot blew across my cock and I gasped. . . That was too much for me. A brief intermission is required🫡

Fucking awesome! Five stars and a favorite point!

The hesitation throughout brings such a realistic pace for people with a moral compass. A perfect progression including Hamley with the eventual happening.

Romance Novel material, perhaps a courtesan with a rake in training.

These are such interesting but also very hot stories by an obviously skilled and intelligent writer…it’s definitely true that masturbating while thinking of mom and her nipples will produce the most intense…imaginable…keep writing please..

I remember eating my wife one evening as she talked to her mother on the phone. Very Hot ! ! !

I love this story, so perfectly describes a growing lust and love between the mom and her son. Cant wait for Pt3!

So many writers focus on the mechanics of sex, what goes where - and whatnot. It's refreshing to see one write about the beauty and feeling of it. Thank you for that. :)

One of the few stories on this site that can rival DesmondAndromeda's writings for me. Excellent work, you're very talented.

Piss poor writing style. Truckloads of words to describe even a minute little inconsequential action and yet would fail to build any heightened sense of erotic or intimate feelings. Take for example below entire paragraph full of craploads of idiotic words crammed together:

"My body started tingling with arousal. I swallowed and then licked my lips, looking up at her face. Her eyes seemed glassy, the light reflecting off their surface. She didn't seem nervous. Apprehensive maybe, but not nervous. My heart was thudding loudly in my chest, my lungs taking only partial breaths. I decided this was probably just as much of a turn on to her as it was to me. And God was I ever turned on."

What a cracking tale this is, a lovely mum and a dutiful son. A recipe for a wonderful story. I often wonder about this sort of scenario, with the increase in wrecked marriages there must be an awful lot of loneliness, even with children sadly.

Well written. Very sensual. I almost felt like I was acting the scenes with my own mother. What a turn on! Thank you.

Mostly excellent and I'll give it 5 as 4 would not be sufficient by any means.

However, some of your expressions need an editor - as do any good writers.

Eg :- 'We both sat at opposite ends of the couch'. That must be some sight if somewhat bloody!

It's a common mistake and should read 'We sat at opposite ends of the couch.'

I know it seems a bit pernickety but the image of a couple carved up rather spoils the eroticism for me.

Absolute perfection! This is exactly what I like done to me—nipples licked and sucked at the same time my clit is being rubbed until I have an explosive orgasm. Did I masturbate to completion? Yes, I did! So intense and so good.

Wow! I love the build up with these two.

Your description of breast play really touched a nerve. I adore the female breast and love stories centered on tit play. Thank you and keep it up, so I can!