All Comments on 'The Loneliness Fades Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very Good.

I enjoyed reading this story. It is a wonderful first chapter. I can't wait to read the remaining chapters. I hope Tom doesn't get between them.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
The author painted a vivid erotic picture

I could see the two women making love to each other in my mind, by reading the beautifully described love scene.All I could think after reading the story is, I wish I was there to watch the beautiful coupling. Thanks for the erotic mind fantasy..........Rich

sensuallensensuallenalmost 15 years ago
delicious!

Mmmmm... I loved this story. Good mother/daughter erotica is awfully hard to come by, and this particular example is a real gem. I'm looking forward to seeing Autumn and Rebecca explore their newfound relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful story.

I can't wait to read the next chapter of this wonderful story. It can't fail to be as good as this first one is. Please post the next chapter soon.

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
Rich has said it better than I ever can.

Thanks for a beautiful story.

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
Rich has said it better than I ever can.

Thanks for a beautiful story.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Incredibly well told You'd think it was true

Exactly everything 'BDrich' said

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Had promise, but it gets a D+

Started out great, really. Then they jump into it, so unrealistic and a turn off.

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