All Comments on 'The Long Road to Ruin Ch. 49'

... and glad to see Shiloh didn't lose her lockpicks yet ;)

OMG, FINALLY! I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this chapter. The chemistry between Shiloh and Simon is AWESOME! The whole mission that they are undertaking is so exciting!

Great job! Can't wait for the next!

Great character development. I really like what you did with Shiloh and her scrolls this chapter. In my mind a rogue like Shiloh should always embody: versatility, pragmatism, and cunning. I think that was shown, apart from her quick mouth which lands her in trouble :) Furthermore, do like the idea of only a small percentage of the population being able to cast off even a scroll. Makes Shiloh's ability to do so another 'feather' in her cap, and makes her in demand for those who need that proficiency.

Shiloh continues to be a fascinating and evolving character, and your pacing and characterization of the story is marvelous. Great work, and really nice to see the return of such an excellent story & writer!!