All Comments on 'The Long Weekend Ch. 16'

Good story but you really should read them through before uploading, there are countles mistakes in the wording and you sometimes forget what you said earlier. E.G. She removed her thong. A few lines later you had her still wearing it. Still, it's a good story, I am enjoying it.

A tease can only tease so long Sooner or later a building will fall on her.