All Comments on 'The Look Pt. 01'

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MsCarolMsCarolover 3 years ago

Very nice start! I enjoy your descriptive writing style very much.

lazy_readerlazy_readeralmost 3 years ago

Amazingly evocative! Let's follow Alice down the rabbit hole. (Is that name choice deliberate?)

DevilbobyDevilboby3 months ago

Your writing is superb, particularly the second page, one could sense the growing ecstasy overtaking her on two levels the physical but oh that mental climb to ecstasy.

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