All Comments on 'The Losers Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I do like the story. I kinda wish there was more 'posse' stories with a risk element out there.

One thing I do find strange is where you use telling instead of showing. Some of the places you don't fill out which would have made a hot situation even hotter.

Still, that said, really good story.

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