All Comments on 'The Lost Prince Bk. 02'

Defintely up to the standard of part 1, I can only hope the wait for part 3 is not as long. Superb.

Yay I was waiting for this one next to emperor. Great continuation of the story, and I hope to see part 3 soon in the future.

5/5

Spend my whole day on this. I hope part three will be out soon

Damn, I was happy to see this show up in my feed. Thank you. Looking forward to the continuation.

I believe Dean Winchester said it beat "angels are dicks"

Outstanding!!!

strong powerfully written story series, very much looking forward to much more

Just an amazing follow up to the first chapter. Already this was my favorite story of yours and this chapter just made it better. I cannot wait to see what you have planned for the 3rd and possibly final chapter of this book.

I was very much looking forward to this and I'm happy to say I was not disappointed. Can't wait for the next one

Hug the baby , kiss the wife You Have Done Well !

Excellent story. Like your other works, a very well constructed and written piece of work.

Many thanks for sharing with us all...

Very good

I love the narrative, I feel that the sex scenes are too frequent. I know that complaining about sex scenes on a sex sight might seem silly and it is but these scenes don't serve the narrative. I feel like a quarter could have been cut out and the story would have been just as good and the pacing far better. Near the end I found myself just scanning through them to get back to the plot.

Brilliant. I love this story.

MORE. MORE. MOOOOOOORE!!!

Amazing story! Please continue.

I always love the your story goes..

Wonder if you added more of character development , must be better

Stellar. Positively captivating, this read. Disagree entirely with Vagabond writer regarding sex scenes, the pacing was well-structured and the smut was clever, fun, and hot. I only pray the wait to be brief until I am enjoying the next Book. Q~

A good story, but it badly needs an editor. Not just for the (mostly minor) spelling errors, but also for the proper use of commas and periods. Oh, and apostrophes. Those three are the biggest things needing to be fixed.

A good read… but our hero could have flown faster than the lizards and once close enough to the desert city open a portal for paxali or Oti to come through. Or follow the connection Oti had with her father to portal them to his chambers

Great series. More please...

Fantastic as always… please not 2 more years for next installment. Don’t let the ankle biter’s comments bother you. Grammar, spelling, punctuation are all good and far better than average on this site. Storytelling and releasing character details for impact was wonderful. Very creative uses of powers for both fun and fighting. I think it was reasonable for Colin to be at a tactical disadvantage when fighting with individuals who have been training for centuries. Thank you for sharing your stories.

Great story. Thanks for posting it.

Well done! This series is one that needs to go to the finish line. Please let us know your plans.

Hope you finish this!