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All Comments on 'The Lost Wager'

by Macros123

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
"She even challenged him to an arm wrestle to try and get him to pick up some potato chips. He savored every chip after she came back home from the store all broody."

A very nice first story. Your have a subtle, ironic style that is very engaging. I really liked the way you painted the initial part of their relationship: a bit of playful teasing, but unquestioned respect for each other. All through the story I was looking for this playfulness to lead to a sincere mutual affection. Then I read the tags at the end of the story. Maybe I'm just a hopeless romantic. Or maybe I'm a Bilal who has never met his Lani.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice. Nice and clever.

And lots of fun!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Let’s Play a Game

That Lani is special.

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