All Comments on 'The Lottery Pt. 02'

I personally hope you keep writing more. I loved it

Can't wait for the variation they come up with

Gotta say, 20 lashes with a whip is just unrealistic after everything else. Like, that's a degree of punishment that could literally kill a person (unlikely, but possible).

Despite the author's best efforts, this is still going to end up with one of the two scenarios the author specifically said management wanted to avoid. Either only hardcore people sign up, or lots of people back out after being chosen. Good effort though. 4/5

If you go to ElitePain.com, you can see women take more than 100, all with the whip, or all with the whip except for a set on the pussy with a strap. Of course there are unrealistic things about this story, with the women agreeing to all this, but the number of strokes is not so impossible.

Who knew the M in BDSM stood for misogyny? *yawn*

EXCELLENT!!!

Congratulations, that was all that I had hoped and far more than I expected.