All Comments on 'The Love Box Ch. 02'

by ToSexorNotToSex

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MaonaighMaonaighabout 4 years ago
Fun

I find I'm really enjoying this fun story. All I'll say at the moment is keep up the good work, ToSex.

the_stifflerthe_stifflerabout 4 years ago
very good

Thank you for writing this. I like the characters. It's intriguing and makes me want to read more

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 4 years ago

not bad, not sure I read part 1, but I am going to read it hope there is more to come

BillyslateBillyslateabout 4 years ago
An Interesting Story!!

This is quite an enjoyable and cute type of "Romance Story", which I am intrigued by and liking very much. The story seems based in reality, with a definite hint of Sci Fi, which is a change from the literature I normally read.

Please continue with the excellent writing and I am anticipating Ch. 03.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I appreciate the fact whilst it's a device to help the person get laid it's not a creepy mindwashing rape device like you might get in a lot of stories. Instead it's a device that gives a person what they need, In a none creepy way

ToSexorNotToSexToSexorNotToSexabout 4 years agoAuthor
Going forward

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I wanted to make a story that used its fantasy elements to help develop the characters at the same time, so in the next chapters, it's not just about our girl Miri getting laid, but also learning a little about being a decent human being while she does it.

I look forward to seeing her grow with you all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
AMAZING

So when is chapter 3 coming? Cuz I’m hooked.

ramblin2020ramblin2020over 3 years ago

So good. Your stories always weave in the innocence with the provocative. Great so far. Can't wait to read more.

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