by ToSexorNotToSex
I find I'm really enjoying this fun story. All I'll say at the moment is keep up the good work, ToSex.
Thank you for writing this. I like the characters. It's intriguing and makes me want to read more
not bad, not sure I read part 1, but I am going to read it hope there is more to come
This is quite an enjoyable and cute type of "Romance Story", which I am intrigued by and liking very much. The story seems based in reality, with a definite hint of Sci Fi, which is a change from the literature I normally read.
Please continue with the excellent writing and I am anticipating Ch. 03.
I appreciate the fact whilst it's a device to help the person get laid it's not a creepy mindwashing rape device like you might get in a lot of stories. Instead it's a device that gives a person what they need, In a none creepy way
Thanks for the feedback everyone! I wanted to make a story that used its fantasy elements to help develop the characters at the same time, so in the next chapters, it's not just about our girl Miri getting laid, but also learning a little about being a decent human being while she does it.
I look forward to seeing her grow with you all!
So good. Your stories always weave in the innocence with the provocative. Great so far. Can't wait to read more.