All Comments on 'The Lowborn's Rise Ch. 03'

I have read the first three chapters. I wonder if you have English as a second language. There are many sentences which do not flow well for easy reading, words which maybe should have been past tense, or as plurals. Other times it was almost as if you were being poetic, overly descriptive, it was just hard work to read. I have no issue with the story being told. You really should look for an editor to help you.