All Comments on 'The Lusty Futanari Noblewoman'

by AlexMarkov

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RoseBRoseBover 4 years ago
Loved it!

I loved the characters, your descriptions, and narration! Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hope it is a series

Really hope you plan to make this a several part series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

it would be better if the proportions weren't absurd

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

This could have been a LOT sexier. First of all, urchins are filthy and unclean, so it would have made more sense if they bathed him first. Second, you totally missed the opportunity to put him into skirts - after his bath, of course. And making the Lady's tool smelly and semen acrid was a turnoff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Terrific

Great detail and diction. Well done

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

I still gave it a 5-star rating, though, I think this idea has a lot of potential for future stories.

kinkyfreakn386kinkyfreakn386about 4 years ago
SEXY KOOL

Awesome sexy kool sweetie some bitches have all the luck wish it was my bitch boi mouth sweetie loves the story sweetie thank you

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