All Comments on 'The M Chronicles Ch. 02'

by AltheaRose

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yowseryowserover 4 years ago
Enchanting

Lovely series, both parts, a house of mirrors, stories within stories, the individuals on edge, then diving from cliffs. Corny start with the Truth or Dare business, but you carried the trajectory with intelligence, perception and humorous wordplay. Splendid.

maddictmaddictover 4 years ago
All in

I have a story to contribute. I just finish creating the contents just give me a minute to wipe up the contents.

Are we voting by stokes

Antonio_y_CleopatraAntonio_y_Cleopatraover 4 years ago
Loved the story within story style

Each of the stories played out differently, and they were all hot to read. Each felt just enough like it could happen. And each had a sense of intimacy. Thanks for sharing.

ManosHandsManosHandsover 4 years ago
Worth waiting for

After the first installment, I was on the lookout for the follow-up, and I was definitely not disappointed. I love the story in a story concept, and the ending, while somewhat predictable, was still very hot.

I've favorited you so will be watching for more 'M Chronicles... or perhaps 'O Chronicles'.

Thanks again,

T

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Really enjoying this series

You make the characters very real and it's easy and erotic to visualize what's happening. Much more so than most stories here. Now that we are getting to know these people and since they are beginning to cross some thresholds, perhaps the next step is them opening up a bit more about each of their particular kinks, some littel "extra" that they incorporate into their masturbation but not something easily admitted to. Whoever has the courage to open up about it would make it easier for the 2nd person and so on. Meanwhile the tension and naughtiness gets to such a level that a new competition begins? Or Truth Or Dare? Or??? Thank you for these stories! - RichardA

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please do continue

This was a great story and I hope you do continue with the "Sex Chronicles." Thanks for writing and sharing your stories with us.

mikesch_236mikesch_236over 4 years ago
Please carry on ....

Very good story -- the only regret I have is that it's at it's end. Please do write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please continue with these characters

Your writing is head and shoulders above the majority of this site. I've been coming here just to see if this chapter was released yet! While you enjoy writing I'll enjoy reading your stories :)

kentucky43kentucky43over 4 years ago
Loved the second even more

Your mind is getting dangerously sexier, indicated by your increasingly hot stories. It's pretty smart to have multiple people involved because it allows you flexibility at any moment. I always love your writing. Keep it going.

TentaclePr0mTentaclePr0mover 4 years ago
Yes yes yes

Wow, please write more of this

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please don't stop writing!

I love your writing and miss it when you don't post. You're the only writer I read from here and feel totally sad when I check back in and there's nothing new. I've read your stories so many times waiting for new ones that I know most of them by heart now. I hope you have a bit more time now for your writing.

Anxiously waiting for the next story!

A super fan ;)

WoodsLord_3540WoodsLord_3540over 4 years ago
Wonderful!

Althea,

I just realized I never commented on this tale. I read it late the night it was released but I felt asleep and never came back. My most sincere apologies, as you (as is usual) deserve all kudos.

Your lovely imagination has delivered again. The five stories about going solo showed the different ways to enjoy oneself.

Of the tales presented here, I enjoyed the shopping trip most.

I did enjoy the little "accident" when Alexis "helped" Bart, but even more so when Liam

was kind enough to make Alexis presentable. Nice.

And I will encourage you in your idea of the possible "O Chronicles." Seems like a great project.

Thank you very much,

Rick

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Damn you’re good

I love your stories! Please continue this one!

ErrolBook87ErrolBook87over 4 years ago
Great Story!

This is an extremely hot story! I hope you do decide to continue it in some form!

jongleurjongleurabout 4 years ago
Best of your tales

The whole series was hot, but I did want to mention that the story credited to Alexis was the hottest of the bunch, even though that was voted the loser in this work.

Great work, I hope to see more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
To Good to Stop Now :-)

Your characters and story are way to good to be left to their own devices :-)

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 3 years ago

Sex was meant to be shared.

The same goes for sex stories--even if they are about masturbation. I thoroughly enjoyed this series. Hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Got me hard

Was stroking all the way through reading and shot my load

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. One of the very best I’ve read on this site. We’ll written, crafted and great content. Well done!

sunburntsunburntalmost 2 years ago

Fun story! Great blend of fantasy and reality! 2 great orgasms reading it :)

JulianxxxJulianxxxover 1 year ago

Please continue this, this is soo good!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

It's been awhile since I truly enjoyed an erotic story. Please continue it!

QuietJohnQuietJohn3 months ago

Great story! More?

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July 25, 2021 Friends, I have returned from an extended break and have posted a new story. I plan to post others, but not at a fast pace. Thank you.

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