All Comments on 'The Magic Bell'

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AbdelkaoolomocroAbdelkaoolomocro5 months ago

Great story, will it be continued? Can’t wait te read what Xander has planned.

Andreas_KreuzAndreas_Kreuz5 months ago

I love the pace in this story and the play with and without bell. But for me, the story works better if the neighbours are not so much involved.

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