All Comments on 'The Magic Corset'

Dark kinky and very hot!

Another great story. Usually I only really read stuff on here that fits my own kinks, but you seem to have a gift for making anything into a compelling story. I wonder what Alan's intentions really were ... and I was NOT expecting that ending!

Anon.: Mmm...

nada: Hi! I think in fantasy we're free to enjoy kinks we never would in real life. (That is, after all, the secret of FSoG's success.) What I really dislike about a lot of tropes on here (dollification, bimboification, mind control, time stop) is the way they so often reduce women to nothing but sex objects - the 'nothing but' being the real problem.

Darn wish it hadn't ended that way - seemed a bit sudden!! I would have liked to see more. Great writing :) x

Thank you kindly... :-)

(I explore something similar in Doll / Doll: Mother.)

1. Clearly she did have some degree of control over parts of herself.

2. The magic was far more powerful than a simple paralysis/love spell. It transformed her clothing and made it inseparable from her. Do you really think it couldn't compensate for other things too?

3. Was there any 'ass to vag'? I mean, I agree it's not clever, and I don't think it's there...

4. Clearly she doesn't need/desire solids, and he does spoon-feed her a little.

This is without a doubt, one of the most unusual reads I have come across. It is disturbing but very imaginative and especially the explanation of the situation considering I thought that it was somehow the husbands doing although trying to figure out why is something I couldn’t come up with. I enjoyed it because I found it well crafted and of course it was nothing like I thought it was going to be but some of the best stories are exactly that. I also have read many of your other works and have enjoyed them immensely. You have some serious talent as an author along with a vivid and wild imagination.

J.D.

I did not see that ending coming at all. Very hot story, even if it wasn't my usual type. That ending though...

Strange, perverse, fascinating. That's a five from me.

She's been dead since last May. It will never be over. Your story brings back memories.