All Comments on 'The Magic Potion'

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mordbrandmordbrandabout 2 years ago

Not a romance. Belongs either in sci Fi or humor, although the humor might be accidental.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What a wild tale! It was really over the top and gave me some laughs, making me suspect it would probably be more appropriate in the Humor and Satire category rather than Romance. Still, good for a smile or two and a couple of disbelieving head shakes! Keep writing.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 years ago

Zero emotion, romance, or even good sexual descriptions. Boring. Definitely not a Romance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Don't give up the day job !!!!

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