All Comments on 'The Maid Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good but short

Nice work, but it should be longer. Add more details, descriptions. Action should be slower, more sensual. Keep writing.

secondsamuelsecondsamuelover 6 years ago
Great work

Everything I would want in a pee story. Really well done.

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