All Comments on 'The Man In the Gap'

Another great story from Jayne!

Unlike your voyeur, I found myself touching myself. As the story progressed, my zipper came down and my hard dick came out. The tip was moist with pre-cum. I so enjoyed the sensations of sliding my hand up and down my arousal, moving my thumb over my sensitive tip. As the story finished, so did I.

Stories written by women from their POV are always the best. Jayne writes the perfect story for those of us who love to golf. What a dream.

An amazing description of how an exhibitionist and a voyeur could interact to both of their Mutual enjoyment. Absolutely loved reading this and getting as turned on by the events as she did.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. You paced it just right!

This is a perfect fantasy - and for me the woman is the perfect shape, thank you

Loved it, Jayne, oh to have been the man in the gap. I loved how it was to all intents and purposes two lovers meeting and walking that path to sexual awakening but from a distance. I loved how it built, the days he didn't come, and your reactions, you really were addicted to him watching and him to you.

Loved this story, Jayne, thank you for sharing. Its pace and the lack of conventional communication are very erotic x

Thank

5 star perfection!

Very enjoyable story. Looking forward to reading some more of your work.