All Comments on 'The Man in the Pod Ch. 01'

also nonconsent

Story started ok but this gay rape thing put me off, sorry I dislike rape in all it's forms.

You should have tagged this for rape.

I really enjoyed this and it was a very creative twist, but you need to change the category to non-consent, that takes priority over SF. I think you could also add a bit to suggest they have hardware in place to use his brain DNA to create real sperm for him that has his DNA.

Nice idea. Looking forward to the next part.

Love how he is a prisoner in "his own body". Kinda what I imagined that could happen if we ever advance to this stage in technology.

<< "I'm... just a brain?" Fred really wanted to scream and run around and cry, but all three options seemed off the menu for the moment. >> For some reason this really made me laugh. Great start for a story!