All Comments on 'The Marathon Ch. 01'

by RichardKimble

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot. Looking forward to part two

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good start. Rena seems more like a frenemy than a true friend. But the story needs her to move the plot. Good work.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

Great start , interesting premise. I'll get to the next chapters later but I like it so far. :)

5/5

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