by BadBadGirlx
your story was ok but needs work. you didn't describe the two women plus you never gave there names.plus you should of had both of them fuck not just one.
i enjoyed your story a lot and found it stimulating (!) and delightful. who needs names when just the activity you describe is so sensual and exciting?
Excellent story! I just had to laugh at the inane comments regarding 'kind of weak'. What an imbecile! Not only can he not make his mind up--kind of weak, yet a score of 100--but neither can he spell. I wish Literotica could keep people from trailer parks from commenting on stories.
It was just right. Not too much info so you can add your own names in your mind. And short enough to keep your interest.
your story got me hard imagining walking me and catching you two, i shot my load then ate it dreaming it was leaking out of your cunts!