All Comments on 'The Master Ch. 03'

I've really gotten caught up in this and hope we see more installments. This is intriguing and mad hot. Thanks for the update!

Strange and icky. Feels like a bad Italian art house movie.

LOL this is near perfect

Please make this your usual "feast". I'm waiting with baited breath. I hope it's at least 3 more chapters until our "Heroine" finds out anything about "The Master". :)

Thanks

This is very well written and it's cear you are a great writer! But I am disappointed on how it ended. You're really not going to conintue with this? Well, at least it didn't end on a cliffhanger... But there are so many unanswered questions! I guess with the way you ended it, it insinuates that Chloe wil eventually be tamed and they all live a happy life In that house.

End on a strong note? The story was barely getting started. Seems to be an odd time to end it. Not sure why you'd start a series and just cut it off so abruptly. Wish your note was at the beginning... I wouldn't have wasted my time.

Please continue!

Im new. But i am loving this series. If i would of known u need to do more than favorite the story and give it a five i would of done more for u to continue

This is one of my favorite stories, and this may be weird but I often check to see if there is a new chapter! Please please continue!

That there was lack of interest? How are we going to know what happens to the offspring? Does Chloe get to change him in some way?

I keep checking for more chapters. Please don’t stop here!

Please add more to this story!!!

Oh dude. I know you are not about to pique my interestand leave me hanging lmao. You have to finish! So far its great and i love it! Youre doing good. Just push through and for all you know its gonna be in the hall of fame here one day. I am super into this story already and so are lots of other people! Please keep writing. I beg of you :D

Damn, your stories are sexually delightful, please continue!

A quick compliment to add to the others below in hopes you will resume the series. I enjoyed all three chapters. Immensely. Thank you for erotic enjoyment this morning.

kept going

I keep coming back to check if there is more to this story!

Please rethink ending this. Your writing is great and makes the reader want more. It seems there are several directions this could go and I would really like to see which you would chose. Do not give up.

Do you know how hard it is find such a good read? The was no whips,chains or beatings just pure mental domination..... please write some more

This is an amazing story. The nightmare bit was extremely interesting and I love the impregnation themes all around. What a pity it will be discontinued.

Yes, more please!

I would like more please. Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.

Is there a chance that you'll add more to this story?

Bombard the comments with requests of more will you keep writing them?

Well written. Very intriguing has kept me curios. I want to know MORE. Please??!!

You suckered me in. Please keep going!!!

Please continue!

please update!!!! I will pay good money for it!

You pulled me in and I can't wait to see what happens. How about another chapter? Or 2, or 3...

You have an interesting story and now I'm hanging. I'd sure like to know how this will play out. Do continue. ...please.

Would love more!!

I'm invested now!

I loved it!! You should write more! 🥰😍

This is near perfect - or would be, if you finished it. Lack of reader demand? Perhaps not enough people had discovered the series before, but I’d say there is a demand now. Could you perhaps reconsider your decision to stop the series?

This is an interesting story that answers to certain female fantasies of course but is more interesting than that. You touch upon a deep subject about which I happened to have made a study of and written about. It is the philosophical and practical question of whether the biological mind of the female body is stronger than the will of the woman that inhabits the body. I have come to think it is, exactly like you write, and I also found it is politically incorrect to say that.. This means that saying it, like you do, makes it into porn. And that's fine. As long as it is said. Hot story, please, continue.As I am a writer and many people know me, I have to submit this as anonymous. Sorry about that. I would have liked to get in touch with you.

This was amazing, please add more chapters

Aw, I was sad when I saw this was the last chapter

Honestly I loved your story! :( I would love to read more chapters!!

Please more!

Can only agree, please more!

I hope you continue... I admit, I was getting a bit enthralled in the story! This is one of those works that i read, forget about, rediscover 6 months later and devour all over again. It's good. Id love to see what happens to them in the end, though.

I would definitely appreciate more!

Interesting. I’m really curious to see how this turns out.

Please continue I was really enjoying this.

She never asked how many girls were there...or had been there while she'd been there, nor did she ask what happened to the babies!

Was building up nicely - why end so abruptly - please continue

Please continue.

Keep it going!

Damn I was loving it.

Damn, I was actually enjoying that. Hope the author decides to write more

We need more of this story does Chloe become pregnant?

More…. apparently we demand more …

I would love to see where this goes. Oh c'mon, keep going!

I would like to read more about Chloe and the Master's adventures. What will happen when she gets bred?

I would love to read more

Like wise love to read more