All Comments on 'The Master's Way Pt. 01'

by westjayne495

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visioneer almost 4 years ago

One of the better stories I've read on Lit in a long time. You write well, and the patient build-up and gradual opening into Jayne's emotions and desires is satisfyingly erotic. Very much looking forward to reading the next parts.

Joeehartley almost 4 years ago

Nice

I enjoyed this story and look forward to more.

ShadowRosie almost 4 years ago

Very hot! We want more!

PhilStrictUK over 3 years ago

Hi westjayne

Loved the story of control and marking, there are other ways of marking also like collars and piercings which I think you should explore.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

I loved the story. I think you stole it from me, before I knew I had it.

I loved reading this.

Got a major negative but it is fixed easily.

To me the one sided dictation style of writing is only good when mixed with emotion and description.

For all i know following stories might make this unneeded.

Greg

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