by westjayne495
One of the best spanking scenes I have ever read. You have a keen sense for the emotions of the moment and the skill to put them into words. Terrific erotica.
I love the suspense and the eroticism and the wonderful tenderness.
Brilliant descriptive writing too. I can almost feel the beautiful soft cheeks of your bum as I look down and caress your gorgeous pinkish brown anus and your open pouting wet pussy lips.
Fabulous writing
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I scintillating spectacle of super spanking!! Your enjoyment Of surrendering your bottom cheeks to your master was fabulous. Only wished you had referred to “Kevin” as “Master” whilst the spanking ordeal was ongoing - it would have fire in with the title better that way.
But loved it, will there be more??
Jayne
I love this story it so chimes with my own interests, the ritual, the control as you know
PhilStrictUK
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Read this again Jayne - still got me aroused and wanting to be “Master” so that I could also spank your delightful bottom. 😘
I don't know whether this is from lived experience, but the painstaking recreation of microscopic physical, emotional and sexual details leads me to suspect it is. Very powerful.