All Comments on 'The McCallum Legacy Pt. 03'

I'm enjoying this, you certainly get the emotions correct, Bryce is trying to be a good guy, but he is in trouble. His sister was naughty wanting to get a baby without telling him, he, with a family already, should have been smarter.

Sounds like baby number two might be in the way.

Please finish this series, I see that the Oahu and Grandad stories never were...and the long Christmas story was left hanging.

I feel like this has gone on long enough and he has to find a way to have both women permanently. After 3 chapters and his sister knocked up again it needs resolution....

Good chapter with a little plot progression. It'll be interesting how you'll bring some of the plot lines together in a way that makes sense. I can't believe the parents aren't catching on at this point, if not already know as you had them watch Gabi so Georgy could "celebrate". You could have used the house and land as a way to draw Bryce "back home", although it's been a bit vague what Krista does, other than she's late quite a bit. Good stuff! 5*

Loving this story series and hope you write more soon please. I wonder is Georgy knocked up again and how are they going to explain this one? Do I sense another tragedy involving Christa?

Bryce has not learned his lesson, he has not asked about BC recently. He also did not know that he was already in love with Georgy, or he is a cad, and now is at least coming around to loving the sister/ woman with whom he is incestuously cheating on his wife and family.

Still quite a good chapter, more to come, hopefully

Really love the emotions. Obviously not a fan of the cheating but the love is felt.

To a commenter asking about the MC love, I think it is that the sister has transformed into woman in the MC's eyes, rather than just a young adult.

Ironically enough that’s my name and I live in Ohio so two states from Tennessee