All Comments on 'The Meaning of "I AM."'

Very nicely told and highly erotic. I actually like the fact that the descriptions of the men were deliberately vague. It allowed my imagination to spin wildly.

This was not only extremely HOT, it was also quite thought provoking. And it was a good lesson for why we should just go with our feelings and no label ourselves. It is a shame that your relationship with James didn't last a little bit longer than it did. That could have made for even more hot chapters of this ***** story. MLF

So truly erotic. Vivid word pictures of fellatio and lustful orgasms. Loved the steps described. From watching. To being aroused. To opening the mind to a possibility never even considered before. Seeing what male sex can do to another man, seducing him into wanting it. Wanting to suck a dick. Wanting a man to blow him so he can cum in his mouth. I am a man like that. I am a faggot. I love cock, men with big dicks who shoot lots of cum.

I am very turned on by your well written story. I am grateful that you wrote it. I want to blow somebody now.

I read your poetry before I read your story. Beautiful, all of it, Shep. I do hope you’ll share more. I’m moved by your words.

Thanks all for the positive feedback. This was my first try at an erotic story.

I wrote this with some trepidation as the story is more autobiographical than fiction. I still wrestle with the ending to the words "I am..." The face in the mirror was mine and I liked what I saw.