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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Such a good set up

Good work. Please finish this soon!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Maybe a better punishment

The girls didn’t choose to go naked for moral support. I’m not sure how being the only one clothed was punishment. Maybe a better punishment would have been to make Allison be naked and train with the boys then after the boys were dressed for her to have to go into the boys change room, have a shower then get dressed while the boys watched her. This should have continued until the joint training was over.

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel89over 2 years ago

Weird that we haven't seen Mary, the busty redhead, again... She's been mentioned like twice since she introduced herself to the protagonist. I was expecting her to have more importance, considering the bit with her mistaking the protagonist for someone she once knew seemed kinda pointless if it wasn't introduce Mary to the readers...

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